Main Product - Double Page Spread Feedback

Main Product - Double Page Spread Drafts

Draft 2 feedback: I need to add page numbers and re position the mast head to complete my double page spread

Draft 1 feedback : the model in this draft due to the light wings looks out of place therefore i will remove this and place both block of text infront of a solid black background.

Main Product - Final Contents Page

Main Product - Content Page Feedback

Main product - Contents Page Draft

Draft 4 feedback: even though the contents page looks finished when placed with the other products due to it being dark and the other two having quite bright simplistic tonal background i plan to alter this meaning i will also alter the colours of the mast heads and the normal text so its  easy to read and the mast head is exactly the same throughout all of my products.

Draft 3 feedback: I need to add numbers to contents page to fit conventions of professional product

Draft 2 feedback: I have changed the background and removed the images to simplify the contents page to focus the purpose of the page. Also i have removed the glow on the titles.however i think the sub titles and text need to be altered so it is a blocked colour to again simplify it and make the text easier to read.

Draft 1 feedback: The colours look brown for some reason so i will need to resolve this as it isn't part of my colour scheme. Also the pictures don't look right so i need to alter this. The font follows my house scheme but i think it looks like it is out of place.

Main Product - Final Front cover

Main Prodcut - Front Cover Feedback

Main Product - Front Cover Drafts

Draft 1 feed back: This is the initial slightly edited image i took for my front cover, however i think it is took dark. I think the mast head looks good and very professional for my genre but needs to be larger to make a bigger impact.

Draft 2 feed back: This draft now has been made lighter and some information has been added but again the mast head is too small and more information needs to be added.

Draft 3 feed back: I think the bar-code even though it challenges convention and is portrait it needs to be moves further down the page. Also the text covering the models eye line should be moved to create a clear line of sight across the page.

Main Product front Cover Image Plan

Main Product - Image After Effects

Image Editing

When taking my images I tried to remove objects leaving the subject in front of a simple background. Therefore I had to remove background objects by using Photoshop (using clone and brush tools), also part of the subjects arm was cut off in the image so I has to rebuild it using the clone, brush and burn tool to create shadow.

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